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Admin wrote:

Loved it.

Legato wrote:

Admin wrote:

Loved it.

Thanks. In a detailed review what did you like about it? That and the whole meeting between X and Insidious in general?

Admin wrote:

Legato wrote:

Admin wrote:

Loved it.

Thanks. In a detailed review what did you like about it? That and the whole meeting between X and Insidious in general?

The Doctor Horrible reference was pretty good and the conversation between her and Paladia was really sweet, especially with both of them drawing lines, Paladia assuring her she's a better person than Nemesis, and Paladia agreeing to stop her if she goes over the line. Also, Bella watches you sleep.

Legato wrote:

Admin wrote:

Legato wrote:

Admin wrote:

Loved it.

Thanks. In a detailed review what did you like about it? That and the whole meeting between X and Insidious in general?

The Doctor Horrible reference was pretty good and the conversation between her and Paladia was really sweet, especially with both of them drawing lines, Paladia assuring her she's a better person than Nemesis, and Paladia agreeing to stop her if she goes over the line. Also, Bella watches you sleep.

Agreed, even Insidious mentioned that should she does cross the line she swears to Paladia that she will never go after Aida. I also like how X can actually loosen up a bit when dining and dancing with Insidious. Eventhough it was business like you can tell he genuinely had a good time. Even liked Insidious's story concerning her encounter with Power Woman

What do you think of X in this one?

Legato wrote:

BTW. Can you imagine Nemesis and Paladia in-laws?

Legato wrote:

Interesting. Like the bios you gave him.

Chou Blaster wrote:

??? What about my guy's story so far?

Speaking of which, i found pics of future battle foes.

Onaga: You remember Tony the Chirdian from ultra Tide? Nice kid, a "weakling" by their standards as he has a lot of growing up to do.

Now picture Tony, evil, fully grown (ALL POWERS) and the attitude of General Freakken Zod!? You get Commander Onaga, leader of the Pax Faction.

http://chuckwalton.deviantart.com/art/Dreadguard-OConnor-with-Brutus-123690244 look, behold, and know FEAR.


Icon: The "Bizarro" Supreme! Literally! http://skywarp-2.deviantart.com/art/Titan-Revised-Classic-141451889

Especially considering Supreme is built like Spider Man, not the Hulk.

The Void Beast aka Supreme's equalivent of Doomsday:

http://vagrant-verse.deviantart.com/art/Grorn-the-Series-Voydigor-278726860

A Godzilla sized freak life form of energy! With time and space powers to boot!

The Brute: Evil Hulk! A regular guy, hit with plot device rays, and when he flips out, he gets big and mean.

http://rendragonclaw.deviantart.com/art/Gojira-lol-111729983 (HA! Tried to do a lil orgiinal, in how he looks and functions.)

Froggy wrote:

Okay, comments on what I liked about both stories

First up Legato's: You really seem to like building up Insidious/Paladia's friendship, and even though they're villains, they don't seem as monstrous as you'd expect. X came off as a very smooth kind of guy. I think the interaction they had was the best part for me, and something a bit new to see

for Chou I liked the (re)introduction to Supreme and the new spin on him. I remember you've always made the dude a fun character to read

Froggy wrote:

Okay, comments on what I liked about both stories

First up Legato's: You really seem to like building up Insidious/Paladia's friendship, and even though they're villains, they don't seem as monstrous as you'd expect. X came off as a very smooth kind of guy. I think the interaction they had was the best part for me, and something a bit new to see

for Chou I liked the (re)introduction to Supreme and the new spin on him. I remember you've always made the dude a fun character to read

Chou Blaster wrote:

Speaking of Chronological order and canon and such, these story posts will be pretty much inbetween. BTW, I feel like doing another, and this one is a really mind screw. Ready? Good.
Also I was thinking of doing other franchises/rpg stories on here, just not sure which ones to show off.

Supreme:
A Day in the Life2:
Canon: Definitively. (For big, important reasons!)

Story:

:Dan's shift was over, again, and when he sees no one is looking, he shifts into Supreme, and flies to Earth's orbit.:

"So beautiful, up here. Seeing the world like this, it glows. And the color is a mix of all colors. So, damn beautiful." :Cue the Hyperion, of SPHERE!:

"Damn, that's new." :Flies into it, literally, hitting a force field!:

"Oww!"

:inside Rick was drinking hot chocolate, when the whole damn ship shakes!: "WHAT THE ****!?"

Regina: All shields are down! All shields are down!

Rick: *Looks outside, sees Supreme with cyborg eyes.* "Did, that guy do this? Mother ****er!!! I'll tear him a new one."

:Supreme/ Dan shakes off the pain, and sees the ship again.: "They are not shooting me. I better explain myself." :Flies in again, phasing into the ship.:

:Rick saw this all, and has a big ****ing gun ponited at him. Sure, he shook the damn ship, sure, he managed to sneak onboard, sure, he was right there, Rick shows no fear. He sees scary stuff all the time, for a living!:

"You got ten seconds to explain yourself or I am going to blow you away!"

"I am Supreme, sorry the the collosion, you guys stratled me in which you showed u-."

:Blast! Hits him.: 'Don't bore me to death boy! What are you!" :Supreem was hit, it stung, but nothing lethal, as he rises back up.: "I, try to save the world, and I am not your enemy."

Rick: Okay, well then, what are you? Mad scientist experiment, alien?"

S: "No, just born this way."

Rick: Born, that way. So a mutant. Well, your the strangest one I have seen, yet.

S: What makes you say that?

Rick: Because, my cyborg eyes are scanners, Supreme. What I see, when I see you, is not some flesh and blood thing. You, look to me as this."

"A man shaped color. Red, your energy man. You really are different."

S:!?!?!?!

Rick: Well, your decent enough, just in the future, do not ram the ship, okay?

S: Thanks, Rick. :Phases again, and well flies back to Earth.:

Rick:... How the **** did he know my damn name!?

Regina: Probaly has powers for that kinda thing, who knows?

Rick: Right, right.

:Supreme focuses on those, who need saving.:

:Now at a school, laser points in, sees someone, with a gun, flies in, and stands infront of the man.:

"Your not shooting kids, on my watch anyway."

Man: !? :points gun at him.:

S: You really are a dumb ass. :Eye flash, wipes his memory and decks him, knocking him out cold.:

:Latter the would be gunner finds himself, on a raft, in the middle of the ocean, with really big sharks.:

S: Some people are too stupid to live.

*Latter he is human, at a bar in Metro City.*

:Dan drinks, and sees a beautiful woman.:

"Hello there."

Woman: Hello!

:Reaches out, shakes her hand.: "Dan."

"Holly. So what do you do Dan?"

"Work at a hospital, I save lifes."

"Really? That's nice."

"Also Holly, I know your a Taurus, very sexy. And you love the color orange, and you love pets."

"Wow! How did you know that!?"

"Magic."

"Ha! Your funny Dan."

:Latter, gets up out of bed, she was sleeping, and naked. Yes, the man has needs, damnit.:

:Brushes his teeth, and thinks for a moment.: "Living, energy? What the Hell is that exactly? Why am I brushing my teeth then, and why.. Do I feel, human? Is it a mental barrier thing? I guess. Because pure energy would just scatter apart, not take on form. Unless I am some sort of living Green Lantern ring or something. That would be cool, I guess."

:Goes back to sleep, eases his mind, and does so.:

Legato wrote:

Sweet!!! One of the interpretations I liked, well two, was the Davis/Doomsday version from Smallville and the DCAU version. One is due to a interesting twist it gave Doomsday and two is that they made Doomsday intelligent yet still threatening.

Legato wrote:

Chou Blaster wrote:

Speaking of Chronological order and canon and such, these story posts will be pretty much inbetween. BTW, I feel like doing another, and this one is a really mind screw. Ready? Good.
Also I was thinking of doing other franchises/rpg stories on here, just not sure which ones to show off.

Supreme:
A Day in the Life2:
Canon: Definitively. (For big, important reasons!)

Story:

:Dan's shift was over, again, and when he sees no one is looking, he shifts into Supreme, and flies to Earth's orbit.:

"So beautiful, up here. Seeing the world like this, it glows. And the color is a mix of all colors. So, damn beautiful." :Cue the Hyperion, of SPHERE!:

"Damn, that's new." :Flies into it, literally, hitting a force field!:

"Oww!"

:inside Rick was drinking hot chocolate, when the whole damn ship shakes!: "WHAT THE ****!?"

Regina: All shields are down! All shields are down!

Rick: *Looks outside, sees Supreme with cyborg eyes.* "Did, that guy do this? Mother ****er!!! I'll tear him a new one."

:Supreme/ Dan shakes off the pain, and sees the ship again.: "They are not shooting me. I better explain myself." :Flies in again, phasing into the ship.:

:Rick saw this all, and has a big ****ing gun ponited at him. Sure, he shook the damn ship, sure, he managed to sneak onboard, sure, he was right there, Rick shows no fear. He sees scary stuff all the time, for a living!:

"You got ten seconds to explain yourself or I am going to blow you away!"

"I am Supreme, sorry the the collosion, you guys stratled me in which you showed u-."

:Blast! Hits him.: 'Don't bore me to death boy! What are you!" :Supreem was hit, it stung, but nothing lethal, as he rises back up.: "I, try to save the world, and I am not your enemy."

Rick: Okay, well then, what are you? Mad scientist experiment, alien?"

S: "No, just born this way."

Rick: Born, that way. So a mutant. Well, your the strangest one I have seen, yet.

S: What makes you say that?

Rick: Because, my cyborg eyes are scanners, Supreme. What I see, when I see you, is not some flesh and blood thing. You, look to me as this."

"A man shaped color. Red, your energy man. You really are different."

S:!?!?!?!

Rick: Well, your decent enough, just in the future, do not ram the ship, okay?

S: Thanks, Rick. :Phases again, and well flies back to Earth.:

Rick:... How the **** did he know my damn name!?

Regina: Probaly has powers for that kinda thing, who knows?

Rick: Right, right.

:Supreme focuses on those, who need saving.:

:Now at a school, laser points in, sees someone, with a gun, flies in, and stands infront of the man.:

"Your not shooting kids, on my watch anyway."

Man: !? :points gun at him.:

S: You really are a dumb ass. :Eye flash, wipes his memory and decks him, knocking him out cold.:

:Latter the would be gunner finds himself, on a raft, in the middle of the ocean, with really big sharks.:

S: Some people are too stupid to live.

*Latter he is human, at a bar in Metro City.*

:Dan drinks, and sees a beautiful woman.:

"Hello there."

Woman: Hello!

:Reaches out, shakes her hand.: "Dan."

"Holly. So what do you do Dan?"

"Work at a hospital, I save lifes."

"Really? That's nice."

"Also Holly, I know your a Taurus, very sexy. And you love the color orange, and you love pets."

"Wow! How did you know that!?"

"Magic."

"Ha! Your funny Dan."

:Latter, gets up out of bed, she was sleeping, and naked. Yes, the man has needs, damnit.:

:Brushes his teeth, and thinks for a moment.: "Living, energy? What the Hell is that exactly? Why am I brushing my teeth then, and why.. Do I feel, human? Is it a mental barrier thing? I guess. Because pure energy would just scatter apart, not take on form. Unless I am some sort of living Green Lantern ring or something. That would be cool, I guess."

:Goes back to sleep, eases his mind, and does so.:

One of these days. Cant really say when but some day. You and I will work together to do a Supreme and Astroman X-Over. It's going to be epic!!!!

Admin wrote:

Doom.
An epic DC Nation Story.
Planet Earth was peaceful as it gets, considering the super villains and alien invaders all around the world. However, things were about to get very violent and destructive. For a metal ball was hurting through space and heading to Earth. Within the ship was one of the most destructive and powerful creatures in the Universe: The Doomsday Monster. A monster created by Kryptonian Scientists so long ago, created by killing and rebuilding the monster so many times that it became unstoppable. It was imprisoned by The Guardians and sent across the Universe and is now heading towards Earth to meet it's greatest opponent. The Man of Steel, Superman!

The metal ship crashed into the Earth and after years of traveling through the Universe it was all worn down and the impact was the last straw and the ship broke apart. From it's wreckage emerged a tall demonic alien. The Doomsday Monster.


The monster took in it's new surroundings as it walked out of the crater, felt the wind on it's body for the first time in a hundred years, and with a roar of rage it went on the attack.

In the arctic, Superman, known to his family and friends as mild mannered reporter Clark Kent, was enjoying time away from it all in his Fortress of Solitude. He was snapped out o his relaxation when he heard his father's voice. "My Son."

He stood up. "Jor-El."

"My son.....it is time. The Doomsday Monster has arrived on Earth. Your Final Trial is at hand."

Superman had spoken with his father several times but this time it was different, he sounded so....sad, so melancholy. Superman stood tall. "So it is. Alright, I'll stop it. This monster will not win." He walked to the door.

"Kal-El, whatever happens, know that I love you."

"I love you too father." Superman opened the door. "And I'm coming back. I promise." He listened for the monster and then flew off.

Superman arrived at the town in seconds to find everything in flames. The monster had destroyed the entire town. Superman could tell with just a glance that there were no survivors. He clenched his fists in anger, his eyes glowing red as he fired his heat vision down on the beast. Doomsday roared and turned to face the new enemy just as Superman was zipping down and punching it in the face, sending the monster skidding along the ground, creating a trench for miles before the monster stopped and stood up. Superman flew after it again but the monster blurred with incredible speed and punched Superman up into the sky up to the clouds. He stopped and rubbed his jaw. He felt something wet and looked at his hands. The monster actually made his lip bleed with that punch. He held his arms out to the side as the yellow sunlight shined on him and then flew back down to the monster only to find it already rampaging blindly, already tearing through a forest. Superman circled around and then cut it off at super speed and uppercutted it several miles away. The monster landed on it's feet though and as Superman was flying at it like a missile the monster was already super speeding towards him and the two clashed. Superman punched it twice while dodging the monster's strike. As he went for another punch though the monster grabbed his fist and stopped it cold. It then retaliated with a super speed punch that sent Superman away.
He crash landed several miles away into another town and bounced across the ground and skidded to a stop.
"Hey look it's Superman!"
"Come on help him up!" Superman got up on his own though. "Everybody listen to me! You have to get away from here! The Doomsday monster will be here any second!"
"Who's Doomsday?" A person asked.
Superman saw the monster rushing towards the town. "That!" He flew forward to stop it and tackeled the monster and dug a long trench with it's body before it punched him away. He landed on his feet, inhaled and blew at the monster using his super breath. The super breath could freeze whole rivers but the monster continued forward and even with the super breath slowing it down, the monster kept coming. It reached Superman and punched him in the chest, sending him back through the air across the town and into a Clock Tower, causing it to collapse. Superman broke out and held his chest. He saw the monster already on the attack against the town. It was throwing trucks through the air into buildings and tossing people through the air. Remembering what happened to the last town, Superman gritted his teeth and flew at it and uppercut the monster again. The moment it was airborne, he used his speed to put out fires and rescue people from burning and collapsing buildings. "Get to safety. I'm going to take the monster away from the city!" He told the survivors and flew up after the monster. The monster righted itself up in mid-air and grabbed Superman as he was flying after it and the two grappled as they landed on the ground. The monster managed to get the upper hand, grabbed the back of Superman's head and slammed it against the ground and began running at super speed, grinding Superman's head against the ground as it for a mile before Superman managed to trip it up by smacking it's leg, the monster's forward momentum causing it to go flying. Superman got up on one knee and rubbed his face. He had a few cuts and bruises but nothing too bad. He spit on the ground and continued forward, racing after the Doomsday monster and started punching it in the stomach repeatedly before the monster slammed it's hands onto his back, creating a crater with the impact and causing an Earthquake. The monster then pounded on his head again before kicking him away. Superman flew away and bounced across the ground painfully and as he was starting to get up he saw the monster leaping after him and it stomped on his face. The monster roared in triumph for a moment and then felt a burning sensation as steam started rising up out of the monster's foot and then two orange lights emitted from it's foot as Superman's heat vision started burning through it. Doomsday roared and fell back giving Superman time to fly up away from it and continue firing his heat vision. The heat vision was entirely focused on the monster and had the heat of a nuke behind it. The monster roared and thrashed under the power of the heat vision beams before falling down. Superman rose up into the air and continue blasting the monster. As he kept it up however, the monster's foot closed up and bony protrusions filled in the holes and it's skin started becoming harder. The monster's eyes glowed and it snarled as it started getting up and then leaped up into the air, bursting through the heat vision to punch Superman several miles away. He hit the ground hard and his heat vision turned off. He noticed he was in a city now. Superman blinked and touched his chest, he was bleeding now. He shook off the impact and flew up after the monster and managed to smack it out of the air and came down after it. The two clashed with each other and the blows between the two started causing Earthquakes for miles until a titanic blow send Superman rocketing back to the city and through a building. He hit the one after it and fell to the ground. Doomsday marched after him and walked towards him. It growled and snarled at Superman, the monster was stronger now but Superman was not the type to quit. He tried to get up as the monster prepared to smash him but it was interrupted by two red boots to the face, sending it flying across the city whre it was smashed down into a crater by another hero. A hand was offered to Superman and he took it. "Sorry we're late. Are you okay Kal?"
http://fc02.deviantart.net/fs16/f/2007/124/d/f/SUPERGIRL_in_color_by_Wieringo.jpg
"I'll be fine. Thanks for coming Kara." He smiled and then looked up. His super vision letting him see the other helper.
http://fc02.deviantart.net/fs70/f/2011/288/a/1/superboy_by_3nix-d4cyavd.jpg
Superman and Supergirl flew over to Superboy. "Thanks for the helping hand Son."
Conner nodded. "Jor-El filled us in. We've contacted the League. They'll be here soon."
The monster stood up and roared. "Get ready, here he comes again."